Here are a couple of Milly Jourdain poems for you today. Compare and contrast: what do you think? I'll tell you what I think after I hear what you have to say.

(Note to confused new readers: visit the Milly Jourdain Archive to learn about this poet and why I'm reprinting her work.)

Dovedale

Milly Jourdain

There comes to me remembrance like a song,

Of slopes and rocks covered with thin brown grass,

And starred with scabious; there with eager hands

Grasping the slippery tufts of weeds, I climbed

To pick the bright red leaves of fading sorrel:

Then down I lay upon a sun-warmed rock,

And heard the shadowed river sing below.

From a Road

Milly Jourdain

Across the green valley the great hill raises its worn head through the pattern of fields which lie on its warm sides, brown in the summer sun.

Above the line of dark green hedges, beech copses straggle to the top: rooks fly over it and little white clouds.

The short grass is warm and the air is very clear.

For a moment I think I am walking on the hill, stooping and touching the ground with my hands.

But the trailing smell of honeysuckle from the hedge is blown to me, and I know that I cannot stir from the road.