Sunday, February 5, 2012

It's two below zero this morning. A batch of Paul's friends decided to have a polar campout last night, but "my kid is too sick to sleep outside in subzero weather" was the perfect excuse for getting out of it. The poor boy crashed and burned during yesterday's basketball tournament; there was much public sobbing; we had a hard day.

Also there was a great deal of affection. On her own volition someone's grandma ran out to buy him a packet of Tums. His friends hugged him on the gym floor. Girls sat next to him on the bench and tried to make him laugh. These are the advantages of having 10 people in your class, all of whom you've known since babyhood. When you are 14 years old and pushing 6 feet tall, and you are collapsed in your mother's lap crying your eyes out smack in the middle of a busy sporting event, no one is the least bit surprised, although they are all very sad for you.


Home

Dawn Potter

So wild it was when we first settled here.
Spruce roots invaded the cellar like thieves.
Skunks bred on the doorstep, cluster flies jeered.
Ice-melt dripped shingles and screws from the eaves.
We slept by the stove, we ate meals with our hands.
At dusk we heard gunshots, and wind and guitars.
We imagined a house with a faucet that ran
From a well that held water. We canvassed the stars.
If love is an island, what map was our hovel?
Dogs howled on the mainland, our cliff washed away.
We hunted for clues with a broken-backed shovel.
We drank all the wine, night dwindled to grey.
When we left, a flat sunrise was threatening snow,
But the frost heaves were deep. We had to drive slow.

[first published in roger (2010); forthcoming in Same Old Story (CavanKerry Press, 2014)]

5 comments:

David said...

Wonderful sonnet! I found your blog by way of your recent comments on Shelley at Scarriet.

Hope your son is feeling better. I can empathize, having three teens of my own.

Dawn Potter said...

Thanks for visiting, David. I have to say that having teenagers might be my favorite stage (so far) of parenthood. It is so interesting to have one's children grow up to be friends.

David said...

Dawn,

I agree! That is a fond hope for any parent, that our relationship with our children might blossom into friendship.

By the way, just read your essay on Maine poets in LOCUSPOINT. I spent August 2010 through January 2011 in South Portland on a consulting project -- thus enjoying a lovely fall and escaping back to Texas just as winter (of the "mild" southern Maine variety) was bearing down. I enjoyed my time in Maine and hope to return some day.

Maureen said...

Beautiful poem, Dawn. You make the sonnet form look effortless.

Thank you for your comment on Thought for the Day.

Ruth said...

I echo Maureen's comment about effortlessness.

I hope Paul is feeling better moment by moment. In a small class, there can be that "there but for the grace of God go I" moment.

AND, I do hope you are not rendered unable to function by this plague. Teenagers are not especially good at cleaning up at the best of times and most definitely not when it is mom. Stay well!!