My plan is to spend the entire day being a poet, which does not presage laundry or catsup canning but does require me to slavishly follow the windings of my illogical mind, to conceal the kitchen table beneath splayed-open books, to take notes about everything, and to be on guard against the simplifications of end-stop punctuation.
Here's what I think. When writing a first draft, you should never trust a period. It shuts a door to a secret passageway, hung with spiderwebs and black beetles and stacked with dusty steamer trunks crammed with unpaid bills and first editions of novels by faded ladies and shrunken whalebone corsets and false mustaches and cruel letters home from college. But if you don't open that door, you will never know they exist. If you don't erase that period and replace it with "and" or "which" or "while" or "because" or "despite," all you have on your page is what you already knew anyway. And what's the point of that?
4 comments:
Love that last paragraph!
I love that you use "catsup" rather than "ketchup." Let's think about how "up" the cats may be. Let's ask whether the ketch is up (high tide) or or or...
words are so thrilling
wow. I now must reconsider the period.
Wait...here we go: I now must reconsider the period while I write some sort of drivel, and
try to connect experience with symbology.
YIKES.
Hah! See what I mean?
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