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Friday, July 22, 2011

A poem for summer and my friend Jilline, who loved it. It's forthcoming in the new CavanKerry collection Same Old Story and has already appeared in the journal U.S. 1 Worksheets. It is highly appropriate that Jilline, the press, and the journal are (or were) 100 percent Jersey. Because so is this weather.


Bargain Shopper

Dawn Potter

I miss you, Jilline, though stuck in this frozen so-called spring

I don’t picture you regretting my grim haunts; you, the girl

Who adored high summer, sporting your cheap slinky cling-

Tight blouses, those cat-eye shades propped in your dyed curls,

Your pink-flowered skirts, and a pair of flapping tacky lamé slides

On your big sore feet. Your beau-idée of taste was a dollar sale

At Marshall’s, the two of us name-dropping Ruskin and Gide,

Stage-whispering, “There’s your boyfriend,” across the gaudy aisles

At first sight of every funny-looker we met: those goat-

Faced circus clowns, those clad-entirely-in-blue albinos—

What freaks wandered this earth! . . . and you, decked out

Like a discount drag queen, lovingly deriding my beige vinyl

Sandals half-mended with bread ties. Only your puff of frail hair

Mentioned you were dying. The freaks pretended not to stare.



6 comments:

  1. This one creates pictures we've all seen. Fun!

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  2. Love it!!! I have a friend like Jilline and I love her sense of "Hello World, Make of Me What You Will!"

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  3. I had a friend just like this too. Some days it seems like I just lost her yesterday although in truth it was 9 years ago. She could always make me laugh and you brought back those great memories. Thanks, Dawn!

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  4. Wow. Was along for the goofiness, enjoying it, thinking what fun...then, I was appropriately gut-shot by the last couple of lines. Masterful.

    I bow to your craftmanship.

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