tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6540771071400993487.post8675602478889807688..comments2024-03-27T07:14:36.800-04:00Comments on <b>Dawn Potter</b>: VocationDawn Potterhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07500960150846895633noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6540771071400993487.post-27283434188250131652014-05-13T06:24:11.099-04:002014-05-13T06:24:11.099-04:00It was one of those poems that took a sharp turn m...It was one of those poems that took a sharp turn mid-writing . . . and then the turn seemed to be the point.Dawn Potterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07500960150846895633noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6540771071400993487.post-91138727823307431802014-05-12T10:10:53.505-04:002014-05-12T10:10:53.505-04:00Wow, that last stanza. . .
Wonderfully sharp, di...Wow, that last stanza. . . <br /><br />Wonderfully sharp, distressing feelings come through this poem.Maureenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13290283101378474845noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6540771071400993487.post-88948514487829300132014-05-12T08:17:19.823-04:002014-05-12T08:17:19.823-04:00It makes a lot of sense, Ruth. A lot.It makes a lot of sense, Ruth. A lot.Dawn Potterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07500960150846895633noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6540771071400993487.post-51526098728598874782014-05-12T08:08:43.205-04:002014-05-12T08:08:43.205-04:00Your entry today is helping to illuminate the Wall...Your entry today is helping to illuminate the Wallace Stevens poem from last week. For me the distress at having the poem addressed "To Daddy" instead of "To Father"is the structure of ideas. When I attempt and I emphasize attempt, to write a poem, I get tripped up by "the structure of ideas" and I forget to allow the "structure of things" to do the speaking. Does this make ANY sense? Well it does to me anyway! Happy MondayRuthnoreply@blogger.com