tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6540771071400993487.post4245523243240701654..comments2024-03-27T07:14:36.800-04:00Comments on <b>Dawn Potter</b>: Dawn Potterhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07500960150846895633noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6540771071400993487.post-28328097515470193652011-01-27T16:39:14.269-05:002011-01-27T16:39:14.269-05:00Maybe it's because I spend a lot of time figur...Maybe it's because I spend a lot of time figuring out where I want line breaks, I appreciate those in "Proposition".<br /><br />In one of those strange concurrences, one of the Post's advice columnists featured this morning a letter about affairs with married men. And then I come here and find this powerful little poem.Maureenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13290283101378474845noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6540771071400993487.post-38827896179683090292011-01-27T12:48:32.984-05:002011-01-27T12:48:32.984-05:00That IS thrilling about your 5th graders, Ruth. An...That IS thrilling about your 5th graders, Ruth. And thanks for the kind words about the writing-struggle descriptions. This situation has gone on for a while, and it's starting to wear me down: but for the moment I'm still banging away at the rocks with my pickaxe.Dawn Potterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07500960150846895633noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6540771071400993487.post-74041010756501160002011-01-27T12:42:21.541-05:002011-01-27T12:42:21.541-05:00I agree that the line breaks are so intentional. ...I agree that the line breaks are so intentional. I am always thrilled when my 5th graders talks so knowly about where the line breaks occur in their own work when I struggle just to write as well as they do! I really like the images aabout your writing struggles.Ruthnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6540771071400993487.post-24519496080465391652011-01-27T09:03:57.370-05:002011-01-27T09:03:57.370-05:00Powerful poem
Powerful imagery in your verse.
Si...Powerful poem<br /><br />Powerful imagery in your verse.<br /><br />Sisyphus hoping for a dip in the downhill road.<br /><br />Nice.Louise Gallagherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13522775693728655487noreply@blogger.com